NPC into Player: Let's Wreck This Game

Two virtual reality games started at the same time. After seven years, one game was thriving and... Read more Two virtual reality games started at the same time. After seven years, one game was thriving and became a world phenomenon, and the other was considered a total failure.In an unbelievable twist of fate, he was reincarnated seven years back, to the time where the two games started, inside the body of a human player. He decided to use his past life memories and enter the successful game to destroy everything that made it that successful.What turn of fate would he end up at? Will he succeed in ruining the Eternal Glory game? Will he change his mind? Let’s find this out together… Collapse Reincarnation, Virtual Reality, Game Elements, LitRPG, Male Protagonist, Gamers, Evolution, Weak to Strong, Overpowered Protagonist, Protagonist NPC The other comments in this section sum up gripes with the terrible plot and nonsensical actions of all characters in the novel. But if this wasn't enough to turn you off, what got me within 5 chapters was the constant over abbreviation. Talent points? TP. SKill points? SP. Etc, for twenty other stats/resources/currencies/thenameoftheMc'sgoddamnmother. You want to know how to ruin the immersion of a reader? make them pause and scratch their head to try and remember what SKASDHASJM stands for again, and how it's relevant to a mob drop. I will give it a Try, after many pushes, even though i will expect many Loop-holes and Plot-holes like Authors other Work "Tales of The Mighty Dragonair".Edit of Chapter 70:Well i managed to read till Chapter 67. While the Novel is not bad, does make the few/many wrongs make Reading not very enjoyable. First of is the Beginning/Start with MC als NPC to became a Player (Human) and Play the Rival Game, that got released at the same Time as MC's Game that got rushed to meet this well made game with good Specs. MC now wants to wreck this "Rival" game, even thought the developer of MC's game were the ones who made their Game a Mess in an attemp to gain more Players from the "Rival" Game. While a very missplaced Target, can a Reader look past it and the NPC becoming Player without any Info what caused it.Now we have the VERY Missing Pieces of Background Info of the Game mechaniks, The VR Pods which the MC playes with and the Almost all knowing knowledge of the "Rival" game, even if he if can look at a Forum (but supposedly or logical only the Forum of MC Game, where not such a Mass of Info of the Rival game can be). Till Chapters 70 is there not a words said how it works.MC uses Dual Swords, with each Hand a Sword, and can use All Skills he has with each Sword Seperatly! With Skills that are Non-sense! A Charge with 5 Sec Stun and 5 Sec CD? MC said he has experience with Player Killing, even thought he was a NPC who was Bound with Rules! Next he tricks a NPC, who is Part of the Story to wreck the Game? Later he Attacks and Kills a Bunch of NPS who guard a Caravan and He was a NPC not even a Day earlier?!And last 2 Things are the rather lacking info about MC's Status, as it isnt Show and only Part showed with no way to know if they are true as the Numbers of MC are a bit jumbled up as MC Starts seemingly at Level 0 than in most Games at Level 1.And the Final thing is the Spelling, while there are no grammar mistakes itself, does the Reading get somehow one toned as many things such as HP, as Health Points, are writen as Hp (as such stats come often up it gets somehow confusing, at least to me) and only the Start of a Line/Sentence First Word is writen big and all others words are small. It really makes it one toned for me and somehow bothers me a bit.Well this is my Opinion of the Novel: The Story is interesting, but the implementation is messy. It starts of the wrong Foot, with unclear VR Game Mechaniks and missing Background infos of MC and his Knowledge. The stange contradiction of MC Past, as NPC, and the casual Acts of MC Killing NPCs.To sum it Up: The Novel is readable, with a rather strange/eccentric Story Flow with quite a few inconsistency. But is it much more Readable as Authos others Work "Tales of The Mighty Dragonair". The story might be good (I don't know since I stopped at chap 15) but the plot don't make sense. MC is a PNJ. And the only PNJ with ego. Why? How?! Moreover, he get send back by a glitch? Why sort of glitch send people in the past AND CHANGETHEIR RACE! And of course he know everything about the game... BUT HE CAME FROM ANOTHER GAME!!! And stop bullshiting saying it's the devs who talked about it and you were eavesdroping, YOU KNOW FAR TO MUCH FOR THIS!The story might be good but not for me. I won't give a note and will just said one think: Try reading this for dozen of chap and if you don't mind, it's for you. Okay... I'll read it. It's good... At least it's way better than some of the top 10 popular rankings. Really? Ok I'll try it Thanks for the recommendation